Stella
Stella a cloaked figure
Floating around the coliseum
Screeching noises of a blade on a wall
The cold breeze of the morning up your back
And then you hear I am the shadows that follow you
And the lights go out
Fin
Friday, June 15, 2018
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Hello Brad it is Jesse and good job on you work but next time can you put some more full stops in it good job bye
ReplyDeleteHi brad
ReplyDeleteI like how you put screeching noises of a blade on a wall. you might need to add some ownership to the blade, and instead of a wall, you could say"the wall." this reminds me of Raven from Fortnite.
bye!